I made subtle changes to this updated version. The point sizes and top margins all match to give the viewer the look of a consistent first line as they click through each page. I also lowered the word "falling" on the first page. The final change I made was to make the period after the word "sink" a light pink color. I had originally intended to make it white, but it was too bright and distracted from the rest of the page. I did this to add some finality to the haiku.
Nice work, Josh!
ReplyDeletelooks good. Nice color transitions.
ReplyDeleteI like your Haiku. I like how you transition from bright blue to dark blue.
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