Tuesday, September 13, 2011

3 Page Haiku - Updated

I made subtle changes to this updated version.  The point sizes and top margins all match to give the viewer the look of a consistent first line as they click through each page.  I also lowered the word "falling" on the first page.  The final change I made was to make the period after the word "sink" a light pink color.  I had originally intended to make it white, but it was too bright and distracted from the rest of the page.  I did this to add some finality to the haiku.

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